Really cool Destiny.I like how you described Cinderella with her golden blonde hair.That was really impressive.Maybe next time try and add more details but keep up the good work! From:Caroline
Really cool Destiny.I like how you described Cinderella with her golden blonde hair.That was really impressive.Maybe next time try and add more details but keep up the good work! From:Caroline
Hey destiny, i really like how you described your character and how you described some of her personalities.
ReplyDeleteThank You Lizzy
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well done destiny i like how you used capital letters and full stops i think you need to describe cinderella more
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumaya, I will try and write more details next time
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Well done Destiny. I really like how you put full stops and how you use capital letters.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jellian
DeleteReally cool Destiny.I like how you described Cinderella with her golden blonde hair.That was really impressive.Maybe next time try and add more details but keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteFrom:Caroline
Really cool Destiny.I like how you described Cinderella with her golden blonde hair.That was really impressive.Maybe next time try and add more details but keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteFrom:Caroline