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Sunday, 28 June 2015

Cinderella description By:destiny

               This is one of my character descriptions. Our class had to choose a specific character and describe                 their personality and their looks. Happy reading!

8 comments:

  1. Hey destiny, i really like how you described your character and how you described some of her personalities.

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  2. well done destiny i like how you used capital letters and full stops i think you need to describe cinderella more

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    1. Thanks Sumaya, I will try and write more details next time

      Destiny (WIS)

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  3. Well done Destiny. I really like how you put full stops and how you use capital letters.

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  4. Really cool Destiny.I like how you described Cinderella with her golden blonde hair.That was really impressive.Maybe next time try and add more details but keep up the good work!
    From:Caroline

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  5. Really cool Destiny.I like how you described Cinderella with her golden blonde hair.That was really impressive.Maybe next time try and add more details but keep up the good work!
    From:Caroline

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