IN WRITING WE HAD TO MAKE UP A CHARACTER AND DESCRIBE THAT CHARACTER. AFTER YOU HAD DESCRIBE WHERE HE/SHE LIVED. I HOPE THAT YOU ENJOY READING MY STORY.
I really love the story of how you describe Ruby as a kind girl,I love your good vocabulary especially when you are using that word fragrance.If you were Ruby,would you like to go and live in Jewels Bay? Thanks(WPS)Caroline.
I really love the story of how you describe Ruby as a kind girl,I love your good vocabulary especially when you are using that word fragrance.If you were Ruby,would you like to go and live in Jewels Bay?
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Hi Caroline, I think that I would actually like to live in Jewels Bay because I love Jewels. How about you?
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Hi Caroline, I think that I would actually like to live in Jewels Bay because I love Jewels. How about you?
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Me too,I love jewels!And also I would imagine it beautiful.
DeleteMe too,I love jewels!And also I would imagine it beautiful.
DeleteWell done destiny!
ReplyDeleteI love your work!
I like how you used description so I could picture your scene and characters in my head!
Maybe next time decorate your work to make it look nice!
Thanks!
Sharnah
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DeleteThank you sharnah , I really enjoyed reading your comment. Now I know what to do next time
DeleteThank you Sharnah I really enjoyed reading your comment. Now I know what to do better nest time. Destiny
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